You doing to Rangers special party at your home next week. You want to invite a local artist who is the playback singer-
Write a letter to your letter
Explain the occasion to him
Invite him to party
Tell him why you want him to perform
Dear sir,
I am going to organise a small party but planning to make it special as well as cheerful for all my family members and relatives.
We will be celebrating 75th anniversary of my father and mother on next month. They have always been special to me throughout my life. Both of them is having 18 liking in listening to Punjabi folk music. I am planning to make this auspicious occasion memorable to them. It will be an amazing experience for them while listening to their favourite songs on a live concert with your voice.
I would like to invite you at our premises to perform. Moreover, I will arrange the pickup and drop facility for the entire staff. There will be a gathering of around hundred people.
Recently have been awarded The Best folk singer by Times Now. Furthermore, I have watched plethora of your live performances and all of them were enthusiastic and rejuvenating. Undoubtedly, everyone was lost in the music and was espousing your to the moves performed.
We all will be looking forward to watch you live again on the stage.
Your sincerely
Navdeep
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am going to organise a small party but...
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Line 8, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ive again on the stage. Your sincerely Navdeep
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7619047619 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69822595059 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645502645503 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.614616496 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.2857142857 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127000301082 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457310659249 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483378474337 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0660517794575 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216115519328 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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