You found a job opportunity in a foreign country. Write a letter to your friend who knows about the country. In your letter mention the following:
what is the nature of the job?
why did you apply for that job?
ask for details and his/her advice about the country.
Dear John,
It has been ages since we both have talked two each other. Lately, I am very busy in my work, therefore, I could not be in touch with you. Please give regards to your family for me. I am delighted to tell you that, I have applied to the Royal Bank of Canada for the position of financial analyst.
You would be thrilled to know that, they had the same requirement for the job, which I was looking for a long time. The job contains work for evaluating different advances proposals related to credit and maintaining documentation part from beginning till end disbursement.
I was always fascinated by the landscape and immaculate nature of Canada. My interest got a new boost when you uploaded images to your Facebook account. Apart from that my career prospect would also be bright there. That is the nucleus reason I had applied for that position.
As you know Canada very well because you are there for the last five years. you are the one to whom, I can rely on getting necessary nitty-gritty about Canada. Could you please! write me back about the basic information about Canada also your viewpoints for working there
I would be happy to hear from you regarding the details above.
warm wishes!
James.
- It is thought by some that it s better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside Discuss both views and give your own opinion 79
- In many countries people are not taking care of their elderly relatives but seeking help of professionals to look after them Do you think this is a positive or negative development Describe your views and give examples from your own life 78
- In many countries, people are not taking care of their elderly relatives but seeking the help of professionals to look after them. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?Describe your views and give examples from your own life. 89
- Nowadays in some countries, children are given fewer responsibilities compared to the past. Some people believe it is a positive development while others argue otherwise.Discuss both the views. What is your opinion? give reasons and relevant examples from 84
- ESSAY In some countries the amount of garbage has become an increasing problem What are the causes of these problems What can be done to solve this problem 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: You
... you are there for the last five years. you are the one to whom, I can rely on gett...
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Suggestion: Write
...-gritty about Canada. Could you please! write me back about the basic information abo...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Warm
...om you regarding the details above. warm wishes! James.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, well, apart from, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74074074074 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49938263982 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657407407407 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5418025636 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1428571429 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4285714286 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27807933355 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874047756099 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672687013275 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145550872088 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609780678036 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.