Dear Dana,
Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best spirits. Basically I am writing this letter just to inform you that, I will not available for next week. My ielts examination date has announced.
It is my apologise to you.I had no idea my examination date will be announce in this month. I called my university and asked about the reason for early exams.However, unfortunately, due to the uncertainty of country situation regarding political immense issue they are conducting the exams on urgent basis.
I have very limited amount of practice of my exams. I need more practice and you know that, ielts is not an easy exams. It is an international test and I want to get higher band.
So, please pray for me. After that, i will meet you as soon as possible.
Yours best friend,
Sarah.
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...announced. It is my apologise to you.I had no idea my examination date will be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, regarding, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 677.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 143.0 206.0 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73426573427 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71034733727 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678321678322 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.3035414359 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.5454545455 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256182097607 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929488890194 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957463550336 0.0603063233224 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118775033948 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527142138987 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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