You had a meal at the local restaurant with your family. Write to a local newspaper to give the feedback.
In your letter, you shoul say
where the restaurant located
what you had for a meal
why do you recommend this restaurant to others.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I writing in connection with my last visit to a new restaurant, which I would like to tell about.
This place with a beautiful view is located in the city center close to the main public park and two underground stations. I consider the place extremely convenient. I had an excellent opportunity to celebrate my birthday party there. My family and I had pasta with tomatoes, potatoes with sugar and pizza for a meal. So, I must admit I had never tried such delicious dishes before. Also, the restaurant has an amazing playground for children inside. My children spent an interesting time there. As a parent, I consider this a very positive tendency. The event was very memorable for me so I would like to share my emotions with others and appreciate it if you could to publish my feedback about this place. This place is worthful to visit for everybody. I sincerely hope my request will not be ignored.
Thank you kindly in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Sarah Brown
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I writing in connection with my last vis...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
Dear Sir/Madam, I writing in connection with my last visi...
^
Line 7, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gnored. Thank you kindly in advance. Yours faithfully, Sarah Brown
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Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...kindly in advance. Yours faithfully, Sarah Brown
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80116959064 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73054957124 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654970760234 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2376650372 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.6428571429 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2142857143 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 4.34317383033 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195318906448 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603371816014 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492801837597 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119812995549 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05696874335 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.67 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.