When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The creation of a convenient environment for new towns has become a burning issue nowadays. While some people prefer shopping centers and malls close to their houses, others, as well as me, feel that public parks and sports clubs are more essential facilities for a comfortable environment. The reasons in support of this view will be discussed in this essay,
To begin with, public parks may provide many opportunities for outdoor activities. Nowadays, people tend to lead a sedentary lifestyle indoors, which is why the opportunity to spend free time on fresh air with family or friends seems to be an essential aspect for new towns. Secondly, public parks and many sports club in the local area attract respectable citizens unlike than malls, thus this trend may improve safety in the local area, whereas big shopping centers often are linked to crime. Finally, large park areas tend to influence ecological situation positively. No doubts, being a significant source of fresh air, trees clean environment and decrease dust level in cities.
Speaking about the opposite opinion, some people claim, that public parks, as well as sports clubs, are not beneficial for the local economy. Usually, parks require extensive funds for the support their condition and sports clubs are not able to bring as much income as shopping centers. However, parks and comfortable environments seem to increase the cost of houses in the local community and attract citizens with large incomes, who tend to pay more taxes.
All in all, despite the view that malls close to houses are more essential for comfortable living, I would claim public parks and sports cubs make the new towns more attractive for new citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, whereas, while, no doubt, speaking about, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12903225806 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54559531303 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.3709010445 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.090909091 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6363636364 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303050870716 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109951241233 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707072652074 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194470460317 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281678281545 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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