You had recently joined a morning course but now you can’t continue as you have got a job. Write a letter to the course instructor explaining why you can’t continue the course, how it can be difficult for you to manage your job and the course etc.You

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You had recently joined a morning course but now you can’t continue as you have got a job. Write a letter to the course instructor explaining why you can’t continue the course, how it can be difficult for you to manage your job and the course etc.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Sir,
I have been attending your morning advanced English class since April’2018 and I must acknowledge that with your able guidance, I not only learned a lot but also got inquisitiveness to know more on English literature. I am writing this letter to inform you that I shall not be able to continue the classes any more.

In March’2018, I applied for warehouse supervisor and interview was done on 15th April’2018 at London. In last week, I was given a call by HR manager, confirming about my selection for post and I was also requested to join as early as possible because company wanted to extend the operation in midland very aggressively. Though, my posting is in Nottingham area, I would have to go far from city near to highway road, thereby, I would start around 7:00 am morning. As a result, it would not be feasible for me to complete the class each day. Even coming to class in morning could be a challenge as I would not get time to ready for office and cook my breakfast. Therefore, I have decided to discontinue the class and concentrate on job which I have been searching after completion of my post graduate degree.

I would not ask for any fee refund, though I expect that fee could be reserved at your end and if I get opportunity in future to join your class, it should be adjusted.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours Sincerely
RAMA

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2018-06-09 apurwar 84 view
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely RAMA
^^^
Line 11, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ring from you. Yours Sincerely RAMA
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 249.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63855421687 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90521100158 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606425702811 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.0994230567 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177693300165 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704487966388 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581739145138 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118711208706 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477394120381 0.0580467560999 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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