to the principal
i am writting in the context that i have applied for course in college which was about biochemistry.i have did my my undergraguation in biochemistry from xyz college and i want to persue my master in same subject.although, problem is that there is no place available. i want this course because i am very much passinate aboutmy reseach i will have to make in this course.i am really into it.some other options which are also more closely related to my subject like microbiology,biology,molecular biology you can also adjust me in these areas.
if its not possible for you to enroll me another courses as all these also have not enough space so, would you like to enrol me in next available course.i really want to study in this college under asd supervisor.it well be ecstatic for me of having enrol in your college.
i shall be very greatful to you.
regards
xyz
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72903225806 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42152092074 2.54303337028 135% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625806451613 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6804123711 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 16.3608247423 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.162294642 44.8134815571 279% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.25 76.5299724578 239% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 38.75 16.8248392259 230% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352654719745 0.216113520407 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153649451342 0.0766984524023 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105275123859 0.0603063233224 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218587657353 0.12726935374 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877059472909 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 8.37731958763 241% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 70.7449484536 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 7.45979381443 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 8.54432989691 201% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 19.0 8.15463917526 233% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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