positive impact and negative impact of globalisation.with increase globalisation whole world become more and more closley each other economically,socially,cluturalturally by many and more mode of communications and transportation.Although some kind of increase competition between nations and peoples as well.which is also good in being increase development and prosperity.positive effect of globalisation ar more as compare to negative which are negligible.
Globalisation has bring the whole world nearer inall prospects of like,with increase facilities of communication and transportation people from all differnt country are just away on the click.Globalisation make the whole world a global village you can talk and even see through internet,travelling becom easy and convient miles of distant is cover by in just mints .with increase in globalisation bussiness are spead all over the globe which bring employment and in turn the prosperity of nation.like, in pakistan due to globalisation increase number of students and other people go other countries for study and work.eventally,there is no biases and discrimination between people,and increase competition between bussiness and development which eventally, bring somthing different and novel.
some kind of negative effects are also associated with globalistion which are negligble.increase competition between local bussiness and multinational which eventally, lead to shut down of local bussiness.and hence, decrease in local emplyoes to employment.like, multinational companey in pakistan coco-cola which bring our local soft drink bussiness down and lose.Disadvantages are only on competition term which can be remove by quality insurance.
positive as well as negative effects of globalisation are present.Although, positive effects are most often which make life convient and easy but,when we see in term of negative impact which make life some difficult .in my point of view postivite effects are more then nagatives,these negatives impacts can easily be managed.perphs, without positives impacts we cannot live without it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, well, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.05723905724 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.29420064359 2.80592935109 153% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52861952862 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 74.0 20.2975951904 365% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 158.87475413 49.4020404114 322% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 449.75 106.682146367 422% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 74.25 20.7667163134 358% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.25 7.06120827912 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0217398821774 0.244688304435 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0150367151965 0.084324248473 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0150483292604 0.0667982634062 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0150367151965 0.151304729494 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150483292604 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 44.2 13.0946893788 338% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -29.01 50.2224549098 -58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 21.2 7.44779559118 285% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 35.7 11.3001002004 316% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.05 12.4159519038 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.19 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.0 9.78957915832 337% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.6 10.1190380762 312% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 36.0 10.7795591182 334% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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