The charts show the percentage of income spent on food and other goods in 3 European countries from 1998 – 2008.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar charts show data about the comparison of expenditures on food and other goods in three European countries from 1998 to 2008.A first glance at graphs reveals that in 2008 annual spending were high as compare to 1998 on all items.
As presented in first chart that how much percentage income used for food stuff.During 1998 German's spent mostly money almost one fourth on food and England spent least axectlly ten percent on it.while France at that time was fifteen per cent.Although,by 2008 French population out number the per cent age of Germany by ten percent increase about forty percent on edible material.However,English population remains behind these two countries approximately fifteen percent almost five percent increase from 1998.
The other chart illustrate the spending on other item by same countries during given time period of ten commencing from 1998 Germany expenditure on other items were highest with respect to other nation nearly twenty percent.while France followed it about decrease by ten percent and England least roughly seven percent.Yet,in 2008 the french spending had been peaked at forty percent proceeded by England thirty five percent and Germany twenty five percent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, while, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37172774869 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91187978561 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586387434555 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 22.4926829268 280% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.190456674 43.030603864 270% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 342.0 112.824112599 303% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.6666666667 22.9334400587 278% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.3333333333 5.23603664747 293% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219940185342 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180615914443 0.103423049105 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890612868687 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180615914443 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890612868687 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.7 13.2329268293 270% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.53 61.2550243902 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 10.3012195122 271% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.06136585366 127% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 11.4329268293 241% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.9970731707 247% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 11.0658536585 253% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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