The diagram below shows the life cycle of silkworm and stages in the production of silk clothes.summarise the main information and make comparison where possible
The following first diagram show the complete life cycle of moth from egg to fully developed insect while, other depicts the manufacturing of fibers from silk.
In first diagram process complete almost in three months with five stages. First step moth lays egg which within ten days converted into larva feeds on maple leaves.Next step larva starts silk production within month however, after 6 days develops into cocoon. Final stage is full development of moth after half month.
Second diagram is about production of silk clothes from cocoon stage of its life cycle. first three stages are about separation of silk threads from cocoon in selection of insect before its fully development. Further to boil and unwind silk at 1000 to 3000 temperature. Next two steps are to form more compact fiber by twisting and weaving. finally clothes dyes in desire colors.
In both diagrams have five steps to complete for development of month and fabrication of clothes, however first process is natural and second in comparison with other is industrial.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...verted into larva feeds on maple leaves.Next step larva starts silk production withi...
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...es from cocoon stage of its life cycle. first three stages are about separation of si...
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...of insect before its fully development. Further to boil and unwind silk at 1000 to 3000...
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Suggestion: Finally
... compact fiber by twisting and weaving. finally clothes dyes in desire colors. In both...
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Suggestion: finally,
... compact fiber by twisting and weaving. finally clothes dyes in desire colors. In both...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13450292398 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45626566096 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608187134503 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.954210609 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17281116207 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694926627882 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637120756662 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110229038327 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355388454989 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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