You have been asked to enquire at nearest local conference centre and organise
introduction course for new company staff. Write a letter to the centre manager and say
-Give some details about the course
-Explain about the course requirement for materials
-Ask about the facilities provided.
Dear Sir/Madam,
As Human resource manager at GSK pharmaceuticals limited, I am writing this letter with regards to an arrangement of the induction session for new employees which is scheduled on 25th November from 9:00 am to 5:00 pm. According to company policy, prior to joining, one day course on organization's standard operating procedures and other protocols should be attended by all new joiners.
For an effective program, there are certain specific requirements from company which include cluster and comfortable seating arrangement for approximately 25 participants, an individual table and chair for moderator. In addition, for presentation, it is highly recommended to have an audio-visual system including speakers, cordless mics and a projector with latest features of light adjustment.
By looking towards an ongoing covid-19 pandemic situation, I would like to know about pivotal safety measures (social distancing, sanitization of the hall) taken at the facility. In addition, please let me know if arrangement of sanitizers, gloves and face covering masks for all participants suppose to be done
from company.
Look forward to hearing from you to proceed further.
Yours faithfully,
Nirav Dave
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended having'.
Suggestion: recommended having
...ddition, for presentation, it is highly recommended to have an audio-visual system including speake...
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Line 5, column 355, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...speakers, cordless mics and a projector with latest features of light adjustment. By loo...
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Line 7, column 292, Rule ID: SUPPOSE_TO[1]
Message: Probably you should use a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...ace covering masks for all participants suppose to be done from company. Look forw...
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Line 7, column 310, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for all participants suppose to be done from company. Look forward to hearing...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 32.9175257732 21% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71038251366 4.54256449028 126% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21251063054 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.748633879781 0.622605031667 120% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.6927033971 44.8134815571 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.625 76.5299724578 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168712343979 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578391458858 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036072450449 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851331071842 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428849962393 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 8.37731958763 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 70.7449484536 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 7.45979381443 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 8.71597938144 185% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 7.59969072165 137% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 8.62886597938 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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