you have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before you have a an acquaintance who lives there.
write a letter to the accountants. In your letter
-explain your situation
-say why you feel unsure about living in the city
-ask some questions about life in the City
Dear Laura,
Hi! I hope this letter finds you in the best of health and prosperity. You will be delighted to know that I have been selected as Product Manager in ' AMWAY' ,an international company, situated in your vicinity. I have mixed feelings about about it. On the one side, I am very elated as getting job in such a prestigious firm is not a piece of cake. At the same time, I am bit perturbed since I have never been to your city which is totally strange for me.
Someone from my friend circle told me that getting accommodation is an uphill task in this area due to industrialization; he added even the rent is very high there. I am very afraid of above issues. I want you to write me back soon about it. So that I can intimate the same with company if it is true.
I would also like to get knowledge about surroundings and lifestyle around this firm whether it is facilitated area or not as you know I have to enroll my kids in school and this is very important to me. And what about the neighborhood there? All are very amicable or not? Finally, I am very excited to see you soon as it has been long time to be together.
I am waiting for your response.
Take care.
Anna George.
- Many people live in the outskirts when they go for holiday do you think it is good or bad? 84
- Many people prefer to live in those countries which offer hot climate whereas others like to live in cold climate Discuss both the view points 78
- some people think that school should teach students to understand about right wrong and good behaviour instead of this being only parents responsibility do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- some people think that children today are not as fit and healthy as in the past do you agree or disagree with this statement? 89
- most people accept that we live in a globalised world but not everyone agrees that is this is beneficial to what extent is globalisation of positive or negative development 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...have been selected as Product Manager in AMWAY ,an international company, situate...
^^
Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...en selected as Product Manager in AMWAY ,an international company, situated in yo...
^^
Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: about
...in your vicinity. I have mixed feelings about about it. On the one side, I am very elated a...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
...a piece of cake. At the same time, I am bit perturbed since I have never been to yo...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, you know, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25877192982 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56633672377 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8064777193 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3571428571 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293576396807 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812173001826 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827201447715 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166699056291 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119010201558 0.0580467560999 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.