you have been studying French for one semester at university, but have decided to change your language course to English. Write a letter to the
Dean of studies, Professor Andrews
-explain why you wish to change your course of studies
-ask if it is possible to transfer your fees for the rest of the year without paying additional costs
Dear Professor Andrews,
I am writing to you with regards to a french course that I am attending at the Business Bridge College in Sydney. after one semester I feel as if I was not successful in it and consequently decide to change my course to english.
my name is tomasz zawadzki and I have studied french for one semester. Unfortunately, after a few sessiomns I realized that this class was not that I was expecting all the grammar and vocabulary were overhelming. Moreover, the course roster is colliding with my work. So I wonder if it is possible for me to change the course to english.
I have a few questuons about this transfer. Firstly, I need to know if it is doable to transfer the tuition fee that I paid at the time of registration for english course. Secondly, I wonder is there any other charges that I should pay?
Thank for your consideration and I am looking forwar to your anwer.
Your Sincerely,
tomasz zawadzki
- You had a good meal in a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it,- describe the meal you had, and -why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. 78
- Today more people are shopping online than ever before Why do people choose to shop in this way Are there disadvantages to shopping online 86
- Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you left the plane, you left a bag. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel.Write a letter to the airline. In your letter.*explain what has happened*describe the bag and 65
- You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you.-write a letter t 64
- Children today are too dependent on computers and electronic entertainment. It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more traditional pastimes than spending all day indoors. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Professor Andrews, I am writing to you with regards to a fr...
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... the Business Bridge College in Sydney. after one semester I feel as if I was not suc...
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...e to change my course to english. my name is tomasz zawadzki and I have stud...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rwar to your anwer. Your Sincerely, tomasz zawadzki
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72023809524 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84511356571 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7427131602 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0909090909 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2727272727 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341297016007 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111708834167 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806493540708 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14688171571 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813803869715 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.