You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged.
Write a letter to a friend. In your letter,
apologize for damaging the product
explain what happened
say how are you going to fix the issue
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Matt,
I wish that you enjoyed your vacation in Landon. I am writing this letter to say sorry for your laptop which I borrowed when you were going on holiday. Somehow, it's screen has gone blank and nothing is visible, not sure what has happened. However, I believe that Laptop is powering on.
I found the problem after returning from my official training which held out of town for two days. Undoubtedly, it is my younger brother who may has done this. He was using the laptop without my permission and he admitted that it was his mistake. Though, it may have not become worse if he did not try to fix the condition.
Additionally, I am still investigating about the exact damage. I will be calling computer engineer to repair your laptop tomorrow. even if, I can find the issue. I can assure, you will see your laptop soon in new look.
I hope that you will accept my apology.
See you next week’s party.
Anshul.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Undoubtedly
...ng which held out of town for two days. undoubtedly, it is my younger brother who may have ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...tomorrow, even if I can find the issue. you will see your laptop soon in new look. ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64848484848 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46826692191 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684848484848 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3679090121 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.0 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6923076923 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223054712747 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738168381705 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793101298292 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118854496185 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069489823088 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.8 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.