You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter,
apologize for damaging the product
explain what happened
say how are you going to fix the issue
Hello Naina,
I hope you and your family are doing great. Finally, i have decided to write to you this letter to make a confession. The guitar, which i borrowed from you last month to practice for my performance in the office event, is broken due to my negligence, i would say. Let me explain to you what had happened exactly.
I kept this guitar on the stand near my cloth almirah, and the ceramic decorative pot, which was standing on my almirah fell on the guitar and smashed it completely. Although i took all the precautions from my end to avoid such accident, unfortunately, it slipped through a slight push and fell while cleaning. I know that this guitar is imported and cost you a fortune but don't worry i have a good news for you. I have already contacted one of friends who lives in the US and asked him to courier the same make and model guitar to me as soon as possible and guess what, he has already purchased it and will courier it tomorrow. It would probably reach to me by the next week, and will hand-over to you as it is.
I am extremely sorry what did with your guitar, and hope i could make it up to you when we meet next time.
Hope to see you soon with your brand new guitar.
Best regards.
Harpreet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...to make a confession. The guitar, which i borrowed from you last month to practic...
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Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... event, is broken due to my negligence, i would say. Let me explain to you what h...
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Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...tar and smashed it completely. Although i took all the precautions from my end to...
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Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... is imported and cost you a fortune but dont worry i have a good news for you. I hav...
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Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good news'.
Suggestion: good news
...ost you a fortune but dont worry i have a good news for you. I have already contacted one o...
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Line 7, column 58, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rry what did with your guitar, and hope i could make it up to you when we meet ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33905579399 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38822595283 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596566523605 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.6207395372 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9090909091 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251326329286 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959809947967 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648547580794 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163896400461 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877226899898 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.