Today, more and more people choose to live by themselves. What are the causes of this? Is this a positive or negative development?
Most people, these days, often opt to live alone, and the prime causes of this changing lifestyle are, migration from rural areas to urban for the high-grade university education and employment opportunities. In my opinion, this is certainly an assertive evolution and has several benefits to an individual.
Firstly, the absence of necessary educational institutions for higher education forces students to move to cities. In other words, there is a significant dearth of education facilities in rural areas, and students often have to migrate to big cities in order to accomplish their dream of having university degrees. Hence, they have to live by themselves for many years until they finish their studies. Secondly, not only education services but also employment opportunities are zero to none in small towns or villages, so the people often shift to the urban areas to get a suitable job. Again, they tend to live alone during this period until they get married. For instance, In the capital city of India, around 50 percent of the workforce is from outside of Delhi that lives by themselves.
To start with the positives, one of the main advantages of staying away from home is that it makes youngsters self-depended, as they become self-sufficient for doing all the household as well as outside duties without taking any others help, which is an essential skill required in order to survive in the modern world. For example, parents, these days, often want their offsprings to be independent in every realm of their life, as it would be beneficial for their future life. Further, this way of living contributes towards their personality by planting confidence and fearlessness to adapt any new path or change in their life.
In conclusion, getting higher studies and well-paid occupations are the main reasons why people nowadays live themselves away from their loved ones. While this would make prepare them to survive in the contemporary world in the absence of anyone's assistance, it would also give them immeasurable confidence to achieve success in their personal as well as professional life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17201166181 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84413352885 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583090379009 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.4174624419 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.461538462 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3846153846 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6923076923 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120889310668 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487737540271 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400461595011 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837148317387 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328041011296 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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