You have decided to go on a holiday to a foreign country for two weeks, and you want one of your friends to go with you. Write a letter to your friend asking him to accompany you. In your letter,
- Explain where and when you want to go
- Give details of the travel, dates and cost involved
- Describe some of the things you want to do.
Dear john,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and to the best of spirits. I am very excited to inform you that my tourist visa to USA has approved and I am writing this letter to invite you to accompany me for a tour to my brother's house in New york next month.
Actually last week, I got my visa approved and I am sure due to your project you also have visa for next three years. It's a great time to visit USA, we could enjoy the various national festivals such as Halloween, Thanksgiving and the most importantly the Christmas. It would really be a great fun. I have planned to go during 1st week of October and stay till December end, that will be total of three months. Even we do not have to worry about accommodation as we could stay freely at my brother's place, the only cost involved will be travel tickets and some shopping that we would do over there.
my brother has also promised to take us to the world famous water fall (Niagra falls) there we could cherish the natural beauty and the fireworks at night. also, we would enjoy the very famous annual sale on black friday.
Please revert me positively as soon as possible, so that I book round trip tickets for both of us and do other arrangements.
Warm Regards
Harry
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| 2019-07-17 | harmankaur | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 92, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'visaed'.
Suggestion: visaed
... sure due to your project you also have visa for next three years. Its a great time ...
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Line 4, column 119, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ou also have visa for next three years. Its a great time to visit USA, we could enj...
^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...hopping that we would do over there. my brother has also promised to take us to...
^^
Line 6, column 155, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...ural beauty and the fireworks at night. also, we would enjoy the very famous annual ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, really, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36324786325 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29065011422 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.3478237873 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8181818182 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155808720147 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516103018034 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693122651675 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835195521205 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892645908059 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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