Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to abreast you regarding my decision,that is effected by various reasons, of levaing the job.
Firstly, I have been working here as a computer technician since 2014 and this sedentary lifestyle has caused some physical and psychological disorders. Therefore, my doctor advised me to switch the field that introduce some adventure and relaxation in life.
Secondly, I yearn to spend some time off with my family to rejuvenate my body and mind as well which, will aid me for future endeavours.
Thirdly, I always have a dream to be a writer because it is the effective way to express your feeling and emotions, so, I would like to pursue my whole time to think and write stories, novel, and songs.
I hope you will appreciate my decision.
Yours faithfully,
Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 2, column 62, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 669.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 137.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88321167883 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79915349161 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.729927007299 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2110866781 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5714285714 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 4.34317383033 276% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14388435754 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759453872857 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652781387591 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0677769173067 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476083755278 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.