It is indeed true that gap among developed and developing countries has been rising dramatically over the years. In my opinion, this can be attributed to increasing population and technology advancements and should be attenuated with efforts from both sides.
To begin with the factor responsible, one is that first world countries have extended technical sources that provided them with abundant menthods to evolve into more stronger nation.Moreover, they spend big chunks of money on infrastructre, health and education that also is make a difference as compare to third world nations their civilians are often depreived of quality education, work opportunities and more vulnerable to deadly diseases.Another reason is population, highly densed countries such as India are failed to afford fundamental necessaties to their citizens which give rise to various social ills that effect the growth of country.
However, there are some practical measures which can be taken to bring equality.The first one is, Rich countries should render financial aid to developing countries by trading and allowing people to work in the country.Secondly, General awareness campaigns should be mounted through schools and colleges by poor countries to realise people about the dire consequences of overpopulation.
In conclusion, this problem has arisen due to dearth of erudition among people of poor and advancement of technology and abundance of resourves in rich countries and concerted effort from governments of both sides can bring a change.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84304932735 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.67436185862 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654708520179 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.2975951904 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 163.140085509 49.4020404114 330% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 325.75 106.682146367 305% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.75 20.7667163134 268% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.5 7.06120827912 432% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0856189214235 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543938841902 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0175114793162 0.0667982634062 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0543938841902 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175114793162 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.0 13.0946893788 260% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.27 50.2224549098 -3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.48 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.75 8.58950901804 137% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 34.0 9.78957915832 347% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.1190380762 237% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 34.0 10.7795591182 315% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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