You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country Write a letter to your Facebook friend In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it s

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You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.
Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter
• describe a news story in your country
• explain why people are interested in it
• say how the story personally relates to you

Dear Ali,
How're you, my friend? I hope you are Ok at your ends; I'm writing to inform you about a new story which happened last week in my city.

Well, as I know, you're interested to know about any news for different countries, so I'm going to tell you about a piece of serious news in my country which is the revolution of 25th January 2011. We have economic and political issues in Egypt from a long time; a group in Facebook called to a strike to set our refusing of these bad situations, and it was a big strike for 5 days in all cities of Egypt.

By the way, most Egyptian people agree about this because they seek a better life; however, some people don't agree about that; they want to stay in a comfortable zone.

Let me add this, I should admit that this new situation In Egypt affected my life, and changed my mindset for many aspects. I believe that tomorrow will be good; However, Tomorrow never knows.

Well, if there's anything you need, give me a buzz; I'll be there.
Lots of love,

Ahmed

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Ali, Howre you, my friend? I hope you are Ok ...
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...friend? I hope you are Ok at your ends; Im writing to inform you about a new story...
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...ut any news for different countries, so Im going to tell you about a piece of seri...
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...be good; However, Tomorrow never knows. Well, if theres anything you need, give ...
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...r, Tomorrow never knows. Well, if theres anything you need, give me a buzz; Ill ...
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...eres anything you need, give me a buzz; Ill be there. Lots of love, Ahmed
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... me a buzz; Ill be there. Lots of love, Ahmed
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...; Ill be there. Lots of love, Ahmed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, by the way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37894736842 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22404388247 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694736842105 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.4902136322 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4444444444 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19703379174 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064606376759 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751247509097 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879579557603 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810019755502 0.0580467560999 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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