You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.
Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter
describe a news story in your country
explain why people are interested in it
say how the story personally relates to you
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ...,
You should write at least 150 words.
Hi Nick,
Hope you are doing really well. As you asked for, I would detail a massive event going on in my country for some time and which I think would be very informative for you.
To begin with, for the last couple of months there has been quite an unrest and outrage among the people especially the youth. Its regarding One country and Two systems, due to which there have been lots of protests going on here causing great deal of destruction and disruptions in everyone's day to day lives.
As expected, more and more people are getting involved in these protests, and quite understandably so as they think their independence is getting jeopardized in a severe way. This cause is quite sacred to them as they feel passionately for their country and would do anything to save its motherland.
Honestly, I personally have a very neutral take on this as I try to understand both sides' perspectives. Though I support the cause with the people, I also understand where this idea is coming from and what main benefits it can bring to this country.
In conclusion, I would just say that this news is just getting bigger and getting international attention too. Moreover,This event has the potential to change the history of the country. Do let me know if you would want to know more. I would be happy to share with you.
Yours buddy.
Jack Nicolson.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: IT_IS[7]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... among the people especially the youth. Its regarding One country and Two systems, ...
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Line 7, column 159, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a severe way" with adverb for "severe"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...eir independence is getting jeopardized in a severe way. This cause is quite sacred to them as ...
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Line 11, column 120, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , This
...ng international attention too. Moreover,This event has the potential to change the h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, honestly, if, moreover, really, regarding, so, well, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71966527197 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64277533665 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602510460251 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4073965445 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12024481804 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466723086402 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545121065309 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0526212295516 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023372640521 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.