You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation about the information you gained by attending the conference.
Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter:
describe what type of presentation you have in mind
what topics it would cover and how long it would take
who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted
You do NOT need to write any address.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr. Watson,
This letter regards to my recently attended conference "Automation: The future of Information Technology", which has been an immensely enriching experinece for me. I would want to share the takeaways from this with all my colleagues who I believe would be greatly benefitted from this too.
Firstly, I would want to keep this presentation quite informal and more like an open discussion where everyone can contribute in their own way freely. It would help them to share their problems and experiences.
Secondly, The topics it would cover is the basics of automation, why we need them? and how this can help us achieve our goals better in the organization? I would want to keep three sessions as the knowledge sharing material is quite extensive. These sessions would be 2 hours each every week concluding with a small test every time to keep my audience engaged.
Finally, since these sessions would be quite technical hence I would want them to be restricted till the Information Technology department only. Also, I feel that our main hall conference with the latest projectors and microphones would be the best place to conduct and record these sessions.
Lastly, I sincerely hope that you would support me in this decision for sharing the knowledge and making the best out of it.
Regards,
Jack Nicolson.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...basics of automation, why we need them? and how this can help us achieve our goals ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, lastly, second, secondly, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 4.92783505155 284% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14932126697 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91732760453 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619909502262 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6756054489 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8333333333 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165673086062 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540501366295 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458522326738 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960565535822 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042107678404 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.