You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter•describe a news story in your country•explain why people are interested in

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You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.
Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter
• describe a news story in your country
• explain why people are interested in it
• say how the story personally relates to you

Dear Mark,
I hope you and all other family members are doing well. it is a matter of fortune that we both have keen interest in journalism. Your last update on International Games played in your country was quite famous over the social media.
this time i have a very exciting news for you that will help you acquire global name. well recently in my neighbouring state Rajasthan a team of scientists from Indian Institute of archeology has discovered an ancient sculpture of Lord Rama. this is believed to be two thousand years old and is found altogether in full shape. People from all over the country are gathering there to have a glimpse of it as it is a spiritual concern and it is fetching attention of scientists from all over the world. i believe that this story will definitely make you gain higher rating and boost your reputation among the community.
Looking forward to your revery over the headline.
Best wishes
James

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Mark, I hope you and all other family members ...
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...ll other family members are doing well. it is a matter of fortune that we both hav...
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...s quite famous over the social media. this time i have a very exciting news for yo...
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...er the social media. this time i have a very exciting news for you that will help you acquire glob...
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...that will help you acquire global name. well recently in my neighbouring state Rajas...
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...ered an ancient sculpture of Lord Rama. this is believed to be two thousand years ol...
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... of scientists from all over the world. i believe that this story will definitely...
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... of scientists from all over the world. i believe that this story will definitely...
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...finitely make you gain higher rating and boost your reputation among the communit...
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... revery over the headline. Best wishes James
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7256097561 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55017321034 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676829268293 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1818967452 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202171939044 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069146720474 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655878788588 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146530056236 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031005630806 0.0580467560999 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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