It is better for college students to live in schools than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree?
students are expected to stay at their educational institutions rather than at home now a days. Some people contend that this is a healthy trend and will allow pupils to gain self freedom and confidence while others assert that it will put adverse effect on the parent child relationship. I strongly favour the notion of students being studying while staying at their educational institution.
There are multifarious arguments to shore up my point of view. First and foremost, on campus education allows learners to gain self confidence and become self dependent. For instance, while dwelling on campus students have to accomplish their duties on their own without the support of their guardians. they are bound to be punctual and on their own while making their day to day chores. Apart from it most of the crucial decisions are to be taken by them without any assistance. Eventually, the extended responsibility makes them more assertive and master of their own. Besides this, staying away from parents turns children from a immature and direction less guy to a more sensitive and focused personality.
On the contrary, members of the opposite party believe it to be a negative development. According to them the remoteness of young ones from their parents will result into decline in the overall development. To illustrate, the young ones will be unable to discuss their issues with the family members and also they shall be deprived of the love and affection of their caretakers. Furthermore, they may feel home sick and develop serious psychological disorders.
To recapitulate, the idea of making pupils study while staying away from home is quite lucrative and it is essential in modern scenario to avail young learners ample individual time in order to make them ponder over their future and perspective career options.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, if, may, so, well, while, apart from, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14381270903 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79738647327 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57525083612 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3805076945 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.533333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142591999398 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515962516429 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635164033143 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871738811447 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390077822553 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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