It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents.
Do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
In the modern era of higher education, students have started moving out of their homes to pursue their education. Some people believe that it is good to do and other do not agree with this. However, I strongly believe that living away for the purpose of education is good for development of students.
First of all, if anyone has to chase the dreams, education plays a very important role in that. Most of the times the good universities and colleges are located in far metropolitan cities and pupils have to leave their parents to move ahead in their lives. The important factor is that children should be in touch with the parents to keep a strong bond with them even by living far from them.
Secondly, parents always wish that their children should follow their dreams and should become a successful person. To do so, it is required that students should take courage of sharing their dreams of higher qualification with their parents. Also, it helps in the overall development of these students because moving out of their homes make them independent and give them exposure which they can never have while sitting at their homes.
To close, for the both personal and professional development it is highly required that students should move out of their homes while staying in touch with their parents and keeping them informed about their lives. This will make the bond between parents and children even strong.
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| 2019-05-17 | Kaur Mandeep | 56 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, as to, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88842975207 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39723917999 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52479338843 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1183607137 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.545454545 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277861321259 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105248085243 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561955840479 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174648912455 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353113520319 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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