You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that now you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter
Describe the situation
Explain why you cannot continue your course at this time
Say what action you would like to take
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I can not keep attending the evening course due to my busy schedule . During this three months course , I learned a lot of useful knowledge about economics which are super helpful in my daily work .
As I told you before , I work as an it engineer in a bank technology centre where the working time usually from 9am to 5 pm which allows me to take this amazing class to learn more financial knowledge . But recently , our team have started a new project which uses huge market data to compute stocks' risk . For the last two weeks , in order to keep progress , after course , I had to work till mid-night , sometime even to 2am in the morning which burned me out . So , I think it will be better that I can focus on my project only.
At the same time, I really enjoyed this course and did find it's helpful which I hope to finish the whole course . I know there is an online course supplied the same material which I would like to take part in . Could you give me more details about it ?
Yours Sincerely,
Catherine Wan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, really, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34825870647 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22422685838 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676616915423 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.2951316055 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202223184597 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771229978738 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529861528503 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143291154786 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435770327305 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.