Dear Sir
I am one of the part-time students of evening computer course with roll number 206 at your institute. I am writing this letter to inform you that it is not possible for me continue my studies because of re-allotment in my working hours.
As you already know, I am presently working as a full time receptionist in a multinational company, my working hours has been extended from 4 to 6 in the evening. That is why; I am now unable to attend my class commencing on 4:30 p.m.
However, I would like to ask you if my class time can be shifted from evening to that of morning because I am free at that time. If not, I would like to withdraw my name from the course and request you to please pay me back the fee I have deposited for the upcoming semester.
In an appreciation of your prompt reply.
Thanking you
Yours sincerely
Ankita Sharma.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ready know, I am presently working as a full time receptionist in a multinational company...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 697.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38364779874 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64112006714 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62893081761 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.3766325138 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5714285714 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57142857143 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292488699463 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134105642127 0.0766984524023 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385527287822 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149380208222 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649595480702 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.42 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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