You have heard that your company is organising a language training abroad for a limited
number of participants. Write a letter of interest:-
- state your position in your company
- explain why they should include you in the training
- explain how your training could benefit you and your company
Dear sir,
I am writing to show my interest for the overseas language training programme which a limited people are required to apply.
I work as the procurement officer in the company pharmaceutical department where I am responsible for stock management and inventory control.
Let me explain my situation in detail. I should be included in the training to improve my communication skills and further broaden my horizon in the cultural heritage of the spanish people.
The training will be beneficial to me and the company in a number of ways. Firstly, it will improve the communication skills because most of our client are Spanish nationals thus such avenue will enhance our trade relationship. Consequently, this will boost sales and increase the company revenue because the training will improve company's reputation and participants will learn the cultural differences which will further increase their relationship with their clients.
Thanks for your considerations. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Xyz. Ibl
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-10-03 | chandni.chhantbar07@gmail.com | 67 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear sir, I am writing to show my interest for the...
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...stock management and inventory control. Let me explain my situation in detail. I...
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Message: Did you mean 'improving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: improving
...l. I should be included in the training to improve my communication skills and further bro...
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...ns. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Xyz. Ibl
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...earing from you. Yours faithfully, Xyz. Ibl
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, look, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55555555556 4.54256449028 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09298068091 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617283950617 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7985464963 44.8134815571 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218744085006 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975091197169 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636276990925 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109237942287 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517011225067 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 70.7449484536 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 8.71597938144 168% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.