You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
• introduce yourself
• describe your plans for the party
• invite your neighbour to come
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr. John,
I am writing this letter to invite you to a small celebration at my place on August 3,2019 as we have recently shifted in the house next to yours and are thinking of throwing a small party in this regard.
My name is Shazia Iqbal, migrated from Pakistan to Canada a week ago along with family to pursue my higher studies in the field of data sciences. Our family comprises of five members which includes my parents, an elder sister; a doctor by profession and a younger brother who is an electrical engineer.
We are planning to arrange a get together at our place which will include a musical night followed by a dinner. The event will commence at 8:00 pm and would continue till 11:00 pm. Further, we are planning to place slides and swings for children so that they do not feel bored.
In this regard, we would like you to join us on this occasion along with family. We apologize for the noise that might be a source of disturbance for you as well as neighbors in the vicinity. Therefore, we are thinking to arrange a sound proof room so that the people living near-by are not affected.
Hope to see you at the party.
Yours Sincerely,
Shazia Iqbal
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-26 | astrlw@hotmail.com | 78 | view |
| 2019-07-28 | Shazia | 78 | view |
| 2019-07-27 | Shazia | 73 | view |
| 2019-07-16 | Saira Faiz | 78 | view |
| 2019-02-14 | Richa Dhiman | 73 | view |
- Some Governments say how many children a family can have in their country should be strictly controlled. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. Is It sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in t 61
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 78
- Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter•explain the reasons for the noise•apologise•describe what action you will take 73
- You want to sell some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter•explain why you are selling•describe the furniture•suggest a date when your friend can come and see the 73
- The way nowadays people engage with each other changed due to technology. Has this change a positive or negative development? Discuss and give your opinion. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
... the field of data sciences. Our family comprises of five members which includes my parents,...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53488372093 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40135170156 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618604651163 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4585650931 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6363636364 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155636689591 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618005994359 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648072888981 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774768394032 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565427663831 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.