You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbour to come
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr. John,
I am writing this letter to invite you to a small celebration on July 27,2019, Sunday as I have recently shifted in the house next to your home.
My name is Shazia Iqbal and I have recently migrated from Pakistan to Canada for higher studies with my family. We are five members in the family including my parents, an elder sister and a younger brother.
We are planning a small get together at our place. Currently, we are thinking to conduct a musical night followed by a dinner. We would also be placing swings and slides for children so that they do not feel bored. The party will start at 8:00 pm and end approximately around 11:00 pm as the next day will be working day.
We would be glad if you can join the celebrations along with your family. In this way, we would be able to know each other as well as the people living in the neighborhood.
Hoping to see you on Sunday at the party.
Yours Sincerely,
Shazia Iqbal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47727272727 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40434244718 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653409090909 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3221303514 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6363636364 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177319844297 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691738919432 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773750637751 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938822919532 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742595147783 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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