You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter:
• explain why you changed jobs
• describe your new job
• tell him/her your other news
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sarah,
Hope you are doing well. I am really very excited to share the news that I have switched my job and have started working as a Business Analyst in a multinational firm.
As I mentioned in my earlier letter, I was in great stress at my previous employer because of the late sittings and project deadlines which had a serious effect on my health. I had started having constant back pain due to working on laptop for longer duration. In addition to this, I wasn’t being compensated for the overtime as it wasn't the company's policy.
My new job role is quite interesting as I had to review and analyze the complete business process and suggest improvements aiming to minimize the cost without degrading product quality . Graphs and statistics have always been my core competency and I am looking forward to gain experience and utilize my knowledge to the best of my ability.
Furthermore, I wanted to invite you to my new apartment which I recently bought from my savings. We will celebrate it together as you were one of those friends that have been of great support when I migrated to this country. I'll be waiting for you on Saturday, September 7, 2019 at 6:30 pm.
See you soon
Yours Sincerely,
Shazia Iqbal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 338, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...eing compensated for the overtime as it wasnt the companys policy. My new job r...
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Line 13, column 185, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e cost without degrading product quality . Graphs and statistics have always been ...
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Line 17, column 226, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...upport when I migrated to this country. Ill be waiting for you on Saturday, Septemb...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, look, really, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70283470942 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648148148148 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1138940045 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9090909091 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188650101818 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714694451343 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427252171559 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100921418631 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425001386358 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.