You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.
Correct the information in this article -
Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter regarding the recently published article in The Travel Overseas magazine. The article title was “Guide to the City Beautiful - Chandigarh”, In that article the editor has provided detailed travel guidance to the Chandigarh city located in the north part of India. I have been reading your magazine for five years and I read that article too but I noticed that there was some wrong information in the famous tourist spot section of the article. Firstly, you have mentioned that SukhnaLake, which is one of the most visited tourist places, is in sector 16, I hereby confirm that the location of the lake is in Sector 6 instead of Sector 16. Secondly, you also stated that visitors can enjoy the metro trip in the city but unfortunately our city is still waiting for the metro railway project. However, other public transport is available to explore the town.
Furthermore, As your team is aware that thousands of travel aspirants read your magazine online and office, therefore, I would suggest you make the required corrections in that segment so that visitors would not be missguided. It is quite vital to publish the correct details because most of the people treat such types of articles as a best travel guide for their vacations.
You may consider my suggestions in this regard, for example, you may publish an apology note in the next week's edition with appropriate information with proof. Moreover, your technical team can easily edit the online article with previously mentioned mistakes.
I hope you may consider my concerns in this regard and do the necessary action to avoid any confusion for the readers.
Yours sincerely,
Deepak Sharma
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... years and I read that article too but I noticed that there was some wrong inform...
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... one of the most visited tourist places, is in sector 16, I hereby confirm that t...
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...ort is available to explore the town. Furthermore, As your team is aware that...
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...o avoid any confusion for the readers. Yours sincerely, Deepak Sharma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 937.175257732 153% => OK
No of words: 284.0 206.0 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03873239437 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63103152201 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 127.690721649 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602112676056 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 290.88556701 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.5193008637 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 76.5299724578 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 4.34317383033 249% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329247840176 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973293865229 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690305762758 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165684392538 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633701291415 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 41.2886597938 211% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.