You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.
write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter
-correct the information in the article
-explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
-suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir,
While traveling I was going through your magazine. I have noticed some crucial information our town published wrongly over there. Therefore, I decided to inform you accordingly.
Basically, the shared piece of content was having wrong details about the city history. There is a typo as well. 2nd paragraph of the content should say, that kolkata is known as ‘city of joy instead’ of ‘city of happiness’. Former name of our city i.e. Calcutta is wrongly spelled in the article.
As we all of aware that this magazine is the best selling all across the world and there are various competitors as well. Sharing incorrect information about any city will not be a wise decision for your company reputation as well as it may create wrong impact on readers. If it continues then popularity of your magazine may decrease. Eventually, others can take over it easily.
However, due to this current situation, it would be helpful to publish an apology letter in the next version of this magazine. Also, I would like to suggest to do a strict proofreading and information verification before you publish it on e-version or printed one.
Your’s faithfully,
SN
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Dear Sir, While traveling I was going through your maga...
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Line 4, column 299, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...utta is wrongly spelled in the article. As we all of aware that this magazine is...
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Line 6, column 275, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... it may create wrong impact on readers. If it continues then popularity of your ma...
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Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest doing'.
Suggestion: suggest doing
...of this magazine. Also, I would like to suggest to do a strict proofreading and information v...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: YOUR_S[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Your' or 'Yours'?
Suggestion: Your; Yours
...ish it on e-version or printed one. Your’s faithfully, SN
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03571428571 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80136424045 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668367346939 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.399093241 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 4.34317383033 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219066580785 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664450553494 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501052629614 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120699084254 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607555232418 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.