You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that the town center in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't really agree with this opinion.
Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter,
say what points in the article you agree with
Explain the way the in which your town center is different from another town center.
Offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article
Dear Madam/ Sir,
I am writing this letter to show my disagreement regarding some points mentioned by about center town of "Ahmedabad" in your newspaper, "The Times of India".
First of all, I really loved the way you have used the graphics to show all the shops and the types of shops as they are the in the same way illustrated in the picture. Even more, I also agree that this is one of the busiest center towns not only during the days but also the nights as people keep coming and buying the things they wanted.
The thing that affected me was the depiction and comparison of my town with the other town. This is because the center of Ahmedabad has enough place for people to park their vehicles and go for shopping without any fear of it being get tolled or stolen which is not the same in other towns. Furthermore, it can accumulate more people compared to the town from other regions.
Finally, I really wish that you should come once to the town and really enjoy the beauty of it in person. Further, I would love to be your guide and give your the tour across the town. It will really wonderful if you come and visit the centre area.
Thanking you,
You're Sincere,
Hitakshi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, really, regarding, so, first of all, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57534246575 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49244809208 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611872146119 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7982078565 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.2 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 4.34317383033 221% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260189820215 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980819454166 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03055977812 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131433918109 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277416658479 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.