You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The report lists several expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter:• Introduce yourself.• Explain that you did not buy the it

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You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The report lists several expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.

Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter:

• Introduce yourself.

• Explain that you did not buy the items listed.

• Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem

Dear Sir,

I am writing to express my concern over the October month credit card statement, which I received recently. To my surprise, this is consisting of a list of all expenses that I did not make last month.

My name is Asha, who is a prominent and loyal customer of your branch. Currently, I am operating the saving bank account whose number is 5768878799908, and the credit card number is 6786876878787. Last month, I withdrew only Rs.10,000 from the credit card for my education fees. However, It's showing payment for exorbitant mobile and shopping purchases, which as per my understanding, I never made.

Therefore, I would like you to revise the statement and send me an updated bill for the credit card. Kindly cross-verify it as well with your team regarding this oversight.

I am looking forward to your prompt revert and action on this.

Yours Sincerely,

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...received recently. To my surprise, this is consisting of a list of all expenses that I did no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, regarding, therefore, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03378378378 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88610022469 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689189189189 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8113187403 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7777777778 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183107907333 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643750151897 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475157693691 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955405885222 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468909083813 0.0580467560999 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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