You have just received a credit card statement from your bank.
The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.
Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter:
• Introduce yourself.
• Explain that you did not buy the items listed.
• Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.
You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Navdeep Puri, dweller of Huston Street New York U.S.A, penning down this epistle to bring your kind attention towards my credit card statement which is depicting about the purchase of costly items during last month. I am one of those loyal clients of your bank who are associated with you since your inception and my credit card number is1122445.
Although I am shopaholic by nature, I did not performed any transaction by using your credit card as I have not activated the pin of this card so far. Moreover, my mobile number and email id are not linked with this card yet. Hence, it is pragmatically impossible to use this card from me end.
Gladly, I have not received any sort of complaint from your institution during my whole tenure, but now it is a matter of grave concern that who has misutilized my credit card without my permission. It would be highly appreciable if you block my credit card so that further misappropriation of funds could be stopped and trace out the accused person who are behind such malpractices.
I am anticipating a prompt response from your side on above cited matter.
Yours sincerely
Navdeep
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 58, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
..., dweller of Huston Street New York U.S.A, penning down this epistle to bring you...
^
Line 4, column 322, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ted with you since your inception and my credit card number is1122445. Altho...
^^
Line 7, column 47, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'perform'
Suggestion: perform
...gh I am shopaholic by nature, I did not performed any transaction by using your credit ca...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r, my mobile number and email id are not linked with this card yet. Hence, it is ...
^^
Line 11, column 27, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...practices. I am anticipating a prompt response from your side on above cited m...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, well, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 202.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82673267327 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70504127676 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648514851485 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5113309543 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.333333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225398375631 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883953655915 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522980949531 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122970300082 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570157015144 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.