You are going on holiday and would like to stay in the same hotel as you did on your last visit.
Write to hotel
Explain why yu have choosen to viist the same hotel
Give them the detail of your stay
Ask them about any events in the area during the your stay.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am John, dweller of Huston Street, New York, U.S.A, penning down this epistle to book a room in your hotel. Last year, I visited your hotel with my wife and we found that the staff is quite friendly and approachable. Moreover , your gourmet food is beyond the comparison. Therefore, we made a plan to visit your hotel again.
I have planned the whole itinerary and I would arrive at your Hotel on 1st of June and stay there for 4 days.It would be highly appreciable if you book a deluxe room along with half board. Kindly allow us any kind of loyalty discount and email me the price details along with mode of payments.
The last time we visited, we were lucky enough to see a street parade in the main town. Do you know if there are any other events happening over the period we will be staying? Please inform us about upcoming events so that we can plan accordingly.
I am eagerly waiting for your response.
Yours faithfully,
John
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...ly appreciable if you book a deluxe room along with half board. Kindly allow us a...
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...r response. Yours faithfully, John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57954545455 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32814980796 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698863636364 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7848852897 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.2727272727 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29814308258 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109906572628 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622992526895 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152928852897 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623026485985 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.