Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you to explore about some other substitute of getting entrance in the Master of Hospital Administration" course at your university as my IELTS score is only six.
Allow me to introduce myself first, I am a Medical student that aspire to pursue the higher studies from your prestigious university. It is extremely pivotal for me to get the admission this year only since, my college is giving me scholarship for this course but if I fail to get get access this year than woefully they will not support my further education. Although, I must admit that my IELTS score is quite low however, I did some research on the admission criterias.
Fortunately,I found out that if a student has high academic rank than his application can be accepted as an exception. Since, I am a brilliant student indeed, I was the topper of my college thus, I firmly believe that my application might also fall into the same category. Therefore, it will be great, if you can go through my academic career thoroughly and than take your final decision as I am very keen to be associated with such a reputed institution.
Seeking your kind assistance.
Yours sincerely,
John
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: , I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86341463415 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97452999202 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639024390244 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.3645004018 44.8134815571 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.777777778 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170721909816 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074392929729 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476849218519 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108764986314 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537973098974 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.