you have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.. thank your friend for the holiday.. explain that you left your wallet in their house.. give them instructions of how to send it back to y

Essay topics:

you have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
. thank your friend for the holiday.
. explain that you left your wallet in their house.
. give them instructions of how to send it back to you

Dear Matt,
Hope you are doing well. First of all, I would like to thank you for the amazing company during our trip to your home town Manali. I am still in trance with the exotic valleys, mesmerizing mountains and the panoramic views of the lake. I can say that it was one of the alluring experiences I had in a while. Now I feel energized and rejuvenated.

I have reached back safely to Jaipur today but when I reached home I realized that I had forgotten my wallet at your house. If I remember correctly I have kept it on the cabinet in the drawing room. The wallet contains some cash, credit card and most importantly my student ID card which I need while entering the university gates hence without it my life will become miserable.

Lastly, I would request you to send me the wallet as soon as possible through a speed post at my mailing address.
I look forward to your response and seeing you soon.
Warm wishes
Said

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Matt, Hope you are doing well. First of all, I...
^^^
Line 4, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... had forgotten my wallet at your house. If I remember correctly I have kept it on ...
^^
Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sponse and seeing you soon. Warm wishes Said
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, lastly, look, so, still, well, while, i feel, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45348837209 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42691996332 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68023255814 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.009089991 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6363636364 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 4.34317383033 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287571724271 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888064416796 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849372014072 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170165157093 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416492941206 0.0580467560999 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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