Hey Prakash,
I hope you are doing well. Thank you so much for a great Holiday. This holiday gave me a lot of memories and I really enjoyed this total trip in your place Delhi.
I reached home safely but When unpacking my bags, I figured out I forgot my wallet at your house. As you know I will forget everything like this. I remembered that wallet in the bedroom where I stayed. Please Collect the wallet and please gave it to Ramesh. He will come to your home to collect it and It is the easiest way to recollect it from him
I look forward to you and when you visit my place Am sure I will arrange a good Lunch for you.
with love
Bhanuprakash
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d out I forgot my wallet at your house. As you know I will forget everything like ...
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Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: GAVE_GIVE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'give'?
Suggestion: give
...d. Please Collect the wallet and please gave it to Ramesh. He will come to your home...
^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
...I will arrange a good Lunch for you. with love Bhanuprakash
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, really, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 536.0 937.175257732 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 127.0 206.0 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22047244094 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35699682299 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21572060938 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 127.690721649 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653543307087 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 167.4 290.88556701 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5062049229 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.5555555556 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1111111111 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371806181632 0.216113520407 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128826083971 0.0766984524023 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882946352438 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252582207433 0.12726935374 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386567194444 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.6 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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