Dear Sir,
I writing this letter to cancel my tickets from Bangalore to Hyderabad on 6th October 2019 by 8 A.M. I booked those tickets from your travel agency unfortunately I want to cancel those tickets due to a medical emergency.
I want to give brief information about the tickets that I booked from your agency. I have an international conference in Hyderabad on 6th October 2019. I booked a ticket from Bangalore to Hyderabad through your agency and the ticket Number is JKL0456 and the Flight number is KFG00046.
I want to explain briefly, Yesterday night my younger brother met with an accident. His friends joined him in the nearest hospital. The doctor suggested to me that his condition was too critical and try to join in Maxcure hospital it is having all facilities for his emergency operation. The Operation was successful but he needs complete bed rest. So I want to take care of him.
I am very grateful, Either If you could arrange the ticket on another day or cancel the tickets and give me the cancellation refund amount.
Looking Forward to a Positive reply.
Yours Faithfully,
Bhanu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
Dear Sir, I writing this letter to cancel my ticket...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Hyderabad on 6th October 2019 by 8 A.M. I booked those tickets from your travel ...
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Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tickets that I booked from your agency. I have an international conference in Hyd...
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Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rence in Hyderabad on 6th October 2019. I booked a ticket from Bangalore to Hyder...
^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... and the Flight number is KFG00046. I want to explain briefly, Yesterday nigh...
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Line 7, column 28, Rule ID: YESTERDAY_NIGHT[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'last night' is used.
Suggestion: Last night
...FG00046. I want to explain briefly, Yesterday night my younger brother met with an accident...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, if, look, so, as to, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9057591623 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73233227263 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623036649215 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1518333516 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0833333333 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290321091957 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772047352268 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090872714634 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140382202104 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111962315178 0.0580467560999 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.