You have just started a new course at college and your tutor has asked you to write him a letter telling him something about yourself.
Dear Sir,
I am a graduate student from Roman University in India. I have studied in India for 15 years. In my graduation computers, mathematics and physics are my major subjects, so I have chosen ‘Computer Technological Engineering’ course at your college currently.
As, I am an ardent follower of latest technology; I wish to take up this course in your institute in Canada. I always been keen to study abroad; moreover, enthusiastic to become a software developer. I was inspired by one of the top MNC’s CEO Mr.Ranjith Paul and admire him for his humongous fame.
I am passionate about long journey and inculcating in adventurous trips with my friends. To my interest I have taken up wild photography as my hobby and feel more relaxed while doing this. This makes me rejoice whole day and help me in achieving good score in my exams.
I hope I would be able to continue my passion of photography and continue my studies in engineering and achieve my career goal.
Thanking you sir,
Yours Sincerely,
John.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...rrently. As, I am an ardent follower of latest technology; I wish to take up this cour...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'been'.
Suggestion: been always
...s course in your institute in Canada. I always been keen to study abroad; moreover, enthusi...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ranjith
...red by one of the top MNC's CEO Mr.Ranjith Paul and admire him for his humongous f...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11998953426 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702857142857 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0490941645 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9090909091 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114663863627 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431541760667 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466639437314 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0505963145391 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03942156237 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.