You have lost an item of value on train Write a letter to the railway company In your letter Describe the item Explain where and when you left it Say what action you would like the company to take

Respected sir/madam,
I am writing to report that, the wallet which I have missed on the train during my doctor's appointment. I was traveling from Southern Station to Rockville to consult the dentist doctor on September 11th, 2019.
While returning after consultation, I stepped into the 4th compartment where the first-class passengers travel. Abruptly, the ticket checker got into that compartment where I was sitting and asked to show the proof of Travel pass. Unfortunately, I had Travel pass in my wallet and rushing to show that to them as my station was about to arrive.
I am suspecting that I might have left my wallet in that Station. So, I am requesting you to find the lost item as soon as possible. Because It hasn't only had Travel pass, it has my Driving License, SIN Card as well as RFID which I use to login to work when I do the remote jobs. I am looking forward to return the positive acknowledge from you.
Thanks and Regards,
Ashokkumar

Votes
Average: 7 (8 votes)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 144, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
...st item as soon as possible. Because It hasnt only had Travel pass, it has my Driving...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 232, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...cense, SIN Card as well as RFID which I use to login to work when I do the remote j...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, so, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69822485207 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76386472464 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621301775148 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.829720661 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108953976296 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473454890301 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570084269333 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0549752312512 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577604330445 0.0580467560999 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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