You have lost your credit card Write a letter to the manager of your bank In the letter explain how you lost the card ask the manager to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement

Essay topics:

You have lost your credit card. Write a letter to the manager of your bank. In the letter

explain how you lost the card

ask the manager to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement

Dear Mr or Madam,

I hope this letter finds you well. my name is Chi Chung, owner of bankcard with ID 5543-3252-4657-1232 which I lost Yesterday.

Let me explain you in detail, while I was shopping in town center, I went to big Mash mall and bought some stuff for my house. As I remember, I’ve my credit card on that shop.

Since you are completely aware, it is important to disable my previous card for security matters. Beside that, any delay may cause dangerous consequences Because I’ve a big amount of money.

Furthermore, I need a new one to pay with it . it is really difficult to buy your vital stuff with cash money. So please send me the new card as soon as possible. I am contacted at the address supplied. Your assistance in this matter is greatly appreciated.

Your faithfully,

Chi Chung

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, really, so, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 690.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 145.0 206.0 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75862068966 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88173078245 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.724137931034 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7562555512 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.5 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0833333333 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225245331501 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701051745058 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531467261024 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114482926175 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016770304154 0.0580467560999 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.44 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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