You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you.
Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter
advise them of your situation
explain how this is affecting you
request a new card
You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear
Dear Sir,
Hope this letter finds you in pink of your health.
my name is Derek Bern, and I am perusing Geological Sciences from St. Peters College and currently in second year. I am writing this letter to bring into your kind notice that I have lost my id card while travelling in a train.
Due to this I am not able to attend my theory and lab classes and ended up with limited access to the library as for all this student id is needed. ThiI am currently way behind my syllabus and mid-terms are starting from next month.
Therefore I hereby would like to request you to kindly issue me a new id card as early as possible so that I can cover my syllabus in time.
Thanks for giving the matter your attention.
Inconvenience regretted If caused any.
Yours Sincerely,
Derek Bern
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Hope this letter finds you in pink of yo...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...er finds you in pink of your health. my name is Derek Bern, and I am perusing ...
^^
Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...alth. my name is Derek Bern, and I am perusing Geological Sciences from St. Pe...
^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...-terms are starting from next month. Therefore I hereby would like to request you to k...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, therefore, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 659.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 145.0 206.0 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54482758621 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36707498725 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689655172414 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1188793773 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.2222222222 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248086233768 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102007186063 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849220112489 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120340358965 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848513430637 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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