You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you.
Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter
• advise them of your situation
• explain how this is affecting you
• request a new card
Dear Sir,
I am writing to inform you that my name is Mathew, I am a 2nd-year student of computer science batch roll no 61 and have recently lost my student identification card while I was in the college library.
As you are aware that this card serves as a proof of identification for checking in and checking out at various entry and exit points in the college and also availing library services, in absence of the student identification card I have to prepare a temporary card every day , when I enter and exit the college premises which is troublesome and time taking exercise, in addition to this I am not able to issue some important books on this temporary card which I require during this week as I have to prepare from my semester exams.
Hence, I would be grateful if you could issue me a student identification card as soon as possible which will help me to avoid the above problems.
Yours sincerely
Vinshu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , when
...ve to prepare a temporary card every day,when I enter and exit the college premises w...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...e to prepare from my semester exams. Hence I would be grateful if you could issue ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d the above problems. Yours sincerely Vinshu
^^^
Line 10, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve problems. Yours sincerely Vinshu
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 768.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65454545455 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76906696634 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581818181818 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6804123711 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 16.3608247423 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 187.038766035 44.8134815571 417% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 192.0 76.5299724578 251% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.25 16.8248392259 245% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.75 4.34317383033 224% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314313302302 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162195940882 0.0766984524023 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524161536989 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171242425974 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573995931994 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 8.37731958763 252% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 70.7449484536 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 7.45979381443 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.58 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 8.62886597938 319% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 8.54432989691 215% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.