You have organised to go on holiday with your friend. However, you must change your plans.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
- Tell them how much you are looking forward to the holiday
- Explain why you must change your plans
- Suggest alternative arrangements
Dear Judy,
Hope you are doing well these days. I am writing to talk about the upcoming holiday which we planned to spend with you and Tom in Canada next week.
I am really looking forward this skiing trip with you, and already got the permission from my boss to take one week off. I also bought the tools and clothes which are needed for skiing. Besides, I prepared some gifts for you two. But unfortunately, a colleague of mine broke his leg yesterday, and I have to go for a ten-days business trip instead of him next week, so I think I can’t make it for the vacation.
As I have a 2-week vacation next month, I suggest that we can change our plan to the end of December. We can enjoy skiing for one more week, and we can also celebrate new year together! I hope your schedule will be free at that time.
I will catch up with you again soon.
All the best,
Ingrid
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-11-25 | shcumihuhu | 73 | view |
- you successfuly passed a job interview.you were told to strart your work on july 10th but unfurtunatley you can not attend your workplace on that day.write a letter to your new employer . in your letter:express your appriciation for the interviewexplain y 73
- Some people believe that the country would benefit a lot from more young people entering into university; however, others think that the large number of people receiving college education only leads to graduate unemployment. Discuss both views and give yo 78
- You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event Write a letter of application to the organisers In your letter Explain why you are interested in helping Give details suitable past experience Suggest ways you might help 87
- You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter:-Give details of the job-Explain why it is important to you-Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference 67
- You have organised to go on holiday with your friend. However, you must change your plans.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:-Tell them how much you are looking forward to the holiday-Explain why you must change your plans-Suggest alternative a 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...sion from my boss to take one week off. I also bought the tools and clothes which...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, really, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 723.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30357142857 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24491583558 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672619047619 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1984755861 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19017160339 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709002822143 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457763308504 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117712806689 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028552903974 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.5 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.