You have a pen friend living abroad. He is interested to learn about the major news items in your country.
Briefly describe any piece of news that is being broadcast on TV and reasons why you are interested to share this news with him.
- Say how you feel when you receive the letter
- Mention why the incident in question is important for you and your countrymen
- Give regards to her parents
Hello John,
Thank you for showing interest in my nation. I am glad that you are fascinated by my territory and want to know about current affairs. When I received your letter, I was delighted to know your curiosity about my motherland.
There are many news headlines are broadcasted but I would like to share key bulletin with you. In my territory, the Prime Minister, Narender Modi won the general elections and elected as second-term Prime Minister in a row. I am excited to share this news with you because electing a leader is vital for any territory.
It is important to every countryman, who will be my nation's lawmaker. By the way, how are your parents doing? I hope, they are doing well. Please give my wishes to your parents. I pray for them, to be fit and healthy.
Thank you again for showing interest in my country.
Best wishes,
Puneet
- ou recently travelled on the local bus service in your town. You think the driver drove badly and was rude to the passengers. Write a letter to the manager of the local bus service. In your letterintroduce yourself and say when the incident happeneddescri 78
- Some people believe that it is a good idea to share as much informationas possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe thatsome information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.Discuss both these views a 89
- The best way to plan a holiday is by not planning at all To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 84
- Traditions are about the past and innovation is about the future and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for the sake of progress To what extent do you agree or disagree with this What role should traditions have in our lives 92
- Do you think design of buildings have positive or negative impact. Which way it can effect on work and live?” 72
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, well, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73026315789 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56426236606 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9748896202 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.3076923077 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6923076923 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25809875775 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086574205954 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085645639475 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154429813026 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584964246608 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.97 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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