You have received a bill from a mobile phone company for international call charges relating to a time when you did not use your phone for international call. Write a letter to companyComplaining about thisGiving your reasonsAsking for bill to be changed | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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You have received a bill from a mobile phone company for international call charges relating to a time when you did not use your phone for international call. Write a letter to company
Complaining about this
Giving your reasons
Asking for bill to be changed

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Dear Sir/Madam,  
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I am writing this email to express my disappointment with October's bill for my cell phone, as it mentioned some pending payments on my line during my annual vacation. 
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Honestly, I've left my personal mobile at my home between the 29th of September till 1st of November, and I can certainly, assured you that no one used my mobile at that time. However, I shocked when I went into your company in order to pay what I thought that only monthly fees, but the employee informed me that there are several international calls have been made in October, during my holiday. I can send you a copy of my flight details and hotel reservations to prove my absence during that time.  
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I would like therefore to double-check the provided invoice again, and revise it as soon as possible since my mobile line has been suspended due to such error and a plethora of business calls have been missed.  
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I would appreciate your immediate action to this urgent matter.  
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Regards  
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Bilal

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 277, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...apos;font-kerning: none'>Honestly, Ive left my personal mobile at my home betw...
^^^
Line 14, column 331, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...immediate action to this urgent matter.

^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, honestly, however, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 7943.0 937.175257732 848% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 742.0 206.0 360% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 10.704851752 4.54256449028 236% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 5.21916439133 3.78020617076 138% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.44474112962 2.54303337028 293% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.202156334232 0.622605031667 32% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1725.3 290.88556701 593% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.3 1.41237113402 163% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 123.0 16.3608247423 752% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 1183.78315394 44.8134815571 2642% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 1323.83333333 76.5299724578 1730% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 123.666666667 16.8248392259 735% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.29896907216 419% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.011461948239 0.216113520407 5% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359100437612 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498295503259 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00843932058875 0.12726935374 7% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020560922792 0.0580467560999 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 90.8 8.37731958763 1084% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -112.59 70.7449484536 -159% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 35.9 3.82989690722 937% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 59.5 7.45979381443 798% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 45.96 8.71597938144 527% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.12 7.59969072165 146% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 84.0 8.62886597938 973% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 51.2 8.54432989691 599% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 60.0 8.15463917526 736% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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