Dear Sir,
I am writing to complain you about the excess cell phone bill for the last month which I have received through post yesterday. I have been charged rupees 6000 extra as an international calling charges in addition to my total due bill.
From the last three years, I am using your numer 8872605060 wihout any problem. I checked my call history where I found no outgoing or incoming calls and is totally contradictory to my call records. Moreover, I use this number just for the using social applications and calling locally.
I am sure that have been a technical error in making my bill. It is a humble request to please check in it once so that I can get my actual bill which is due to be paid on coming monday. I hope you will go through my account details and do the needful.
Thanking you for your consideration.
Regards,
Rupinder Singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 703.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53548387097 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60084033486 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677419354839 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6716511764 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36000898887 0.216113520407 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126680354504 0.0766984524023 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901148489152 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231230393615 0.12726935374 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0959950514713 0.0580467560999 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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